At first we had to start with a brain storm that has three ideas. Then we explain how that idea powers us. My three ideas were people who have impacted me who were my mom, dad and brother. In my first draft, the people who read it said that it was good and that I had alot to work with (which was good) but I noticed something repetitive in my feedback which was that I did not show any emotion to it and I had to add that in. So working towards my final draft it has a lot more details especially in displaying my emotions. I think that creating several drafts makes you realize how you improved in writing and I was able to see that in my drafts.