What we did:
For this writing piece it was a similar process as the first article but the topics were different.There was connecting the artist to their space, unique feature of tiny home design, Sketchup or blue print explanation and more. This second article is mostly about the tiny house and the process or connection.
Reflection:
With this article I had to write about the Sketchup or blue print explanation, and I choose the Sketchup. Since I was the one to do the sketchup I had a lot to write about, the process, how it relates to the artist, the material and such but there was a lot to write about. In my first draft it had a lot of writing but it didn't hook in the reader. I got a lot of critiques about how it needs a better hook or introduction or I had to take out some information. With this feed back it helped me simplify and shorten my biographical article. This article was definitely easier than the first biographical article because I had to explain what my group crated.
For this writing piece it was a similar process as the first article but the topics were different.There was connecting the artist to their space, unique feature of tiny home design, Sketchup or blue print explanation and more. This second article is mostly about the tiny house and the process or connection.
Reflection:
With this article I had to write about the Sketchup or blue print explanation, and I choose the Sketchup. Since I was the one to do the sketchup I had a lot to write about, the process, how it relates to the artist, the material and such but there was a lot to write about. In my first draft it had a lot of writing but it didn't hook in the reader. I got a lot of critiques about how it needs a better hook or introduction or I had to take out some information. With this feed back it helped me simplify and shorten my biographical article. This article was definitely easier than the first biographical article because I had to explain what my group crated.